I LOVE this title and how it connects with the theme of this story. Beautiful job!
I really like the subtle tension in this. It gives a really creepy feeling. Good job starting this off, starting is always the hardest part!
I love Untitled. I think it follows the prompt well, but is unique and inspiring! Good job!
Glass Girls is an awesome story! Really well done! It's very compelling!
Not the Devil" was very unsettling! Sure, snakes creep me out in general, but this one felt creepy on both a conscious and subconscious level.