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Post: The Year-Ago You

Sat, 07 Feb 2015 23:25:17 GMT

Hannah
Sat, 07 Feb 2015 23:25:17 GMT

I thought this was beautiful! I really liked how the story unfolded from that first image of the girl carrying things down to the beach, then developed it slowly till we had the full picture.

SlytherinChaser
Mon, 06 Jul 2015 04:25:32 GMT

A beautiful story about change. I like the way it avoids defining the change as good or bad; it retains its ambiguity and so reflects what seems the true nature of change.

lrc
Fri, 23 Dec 2016 22:56:02 GMT

This is a great perspective piece. I like how the "you" and "I" alternate without confusion--fun.

Alyssa Jordan
Thu, 24 Aug 2017 19:43:57 GMT

I love the subtle messages and themes in this story. The last line is great, too!